I just spent two days attempting to finish this sex scene for the Serviceman sequel, and at the end, I reread it, then went back and looked at the first version of the scene which I’d ditched in favor of rewriting, and decided the first one worked better after all.
I am totally failing at frantic omegaverse sex. On the other hand, I seem to be succeeding at tender happy in-love sex (with laughter! Which of you lot was the one who likes sex where people are laughing?). WTF are you doing, story?! JUST TELL ME. FOR THE LOVE OF GOD. I’LL DO WHATEVER YOU WANT, JUST TELL ME WHAT IT IS.